Thursday, February 2, 2012

Ski Trip Gone Bad

I was walking to school alone. Not how i usually go to school but i missed my bus so...Anyways , i saw one of my best friends, Edwards. “Sup boy”. Surprised he turned around a dropped kicked me in the throat. I let out a loud. “Ahhhh!” “Oops, my bad man.”Edwards knew karate or something like that. So i wasn’t that mad about his reaction. “You straight.” I said. Me and Edwards were close, i mean super close. Sometimes we could know what each other were thinking or feeling. “Hope you felt that”. He laughed then we kept walking to school. I was already late to first block so i really didn’t care.  As soon as we walk through the front door we see our other friend Reed. “Wassup”, said Edwards . He didn’t say anything back though but you could see him smiling. “ Why you smilin’?” “.......My grandma said we can all go on a ski trip together!” “Haha Boss” i said smiling at Edwards. Well Edwards and i were going to the same first period,  so we left Reed. Right after 1st period we saw this girl walking by and she was baaaaad ( like the gorgeous bad ). It was Edwards cousin. She wanted me though but we didn’t talk about it. School day was boring so I'm going to skip ahead. I was so glad it was Friday, and it was even better knowing we had Christmas break and we were going on a skiing trip. After school we all met up at Reed’s house with our bags packed. The only person we didn’t see at school was Johnson (we call him John), he arrived at Reed’s house kind of late. “ Hi guys”. Was sup. I could tell more than anybody that John was excited about the trip. We hoped in the travel van and left out for Alaska.  I could tell we were there because, our windshield was covered in snow and the roads look of ice.  When we saw the cabin were  going to stay in  we went nuts! Its was decent sized not to big or too small. I wanted to go out in the the woods and ski and stuff, but they said no because, they been hearing stories about this  monster that lives in this undesinated area. I didn’t think nothing of it becasuse you know. Imma boss. So i left out on my own. I saw a sign saying  “ do not enter” i  put one  foot past he sign and saw...........
To be continued....

6 comments:

  1. I like it because you are making your readers what until part 2 comes out

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    1. Nice story jaylon lol "Drop kicked me in the throat"

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  2. That was good. I like how the story begins!:)

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  3. Try setting the scene and make it a bit more realistic with the reactions but over-all I'd give it a 7

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  4. IT WAS COOL WHEN IS PART 2 COMMING OUT

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  5. I like this becauseeeee , You my cousin and i like it. Baha ( :

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